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Plasma_Wolf
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 Posted: 03 Oct, 2009
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Chapter 10, tragedy, is uploaded.
Spoiler: it's sad
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johnmyates
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Posted: 03 Oct, 2009
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Pretty good. And sad. This ultra tiny font is incredibly annoying, don't you think?
Marc
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In the night, when the wind dies and silence rules, I remember. And they all live again.
 
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splattedone
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Posted: 03 Oct, 2009
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Yes, Plasma, please put spoilers in normal-sized black text.
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 03 Oct, 2009
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Ok. I've edited.
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 12 Oct, 2009
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With a bit of a delay, chapter 11, Betrayal Ocean: The Tempest, is up. The title's url refers to the chapter. Enjoy 
And now I'm finally going to take my time to read the next chapter of dotswarlock's story.
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johnmyates
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Posted: 12 Oct, 2009
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Nice job. That was a good finish for the battle.
Keep on writing,
Marc
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 17 Oct, 2009
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I've uploaded Chapter 12, leaving the past.
If you thought that the story ended here, you're wrong! Enjoy 
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splattedone
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Posted: 17 Oct, 2009
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Whew, great chapter.
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johnmyates
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Posted: 17 Oct, 2009
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I really enjoyed that. Thanks for the good chapter.
Keep up the good work,
Marc
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Posted: 17 Oct, 2009
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You messed up the color code on Tisa's speech.
Also, please make the Colossi targetable by anti-air. Their size should allow them to be.
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Q.Star.111
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Posted: 17 Oct, 2009
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A fine chapter.
Keep it up.
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My fanfic Brothers In Arms. clicky
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 20 Oct, 2009
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7649-XV25 wrote: You messed up the color code on Tisa's speech.
Also, please make the Colossi targetable by anti-air. Their size should allow them to be.
Thank you, I didn't get topic reply notifications any more, for some stupid reason
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 21 Oct, 2009
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The final chapter, those who fail at history are doomed to repeat it is up
(this time, it's really the final chapter).
Special thanks to dotswarlock because he let me borrow his Three-Rivers node!
Special thanks to NowakPL, because he was the first one who came up with the phantom mod (initially played on Sung Island)
Special thanks to novaprim3 because he was the one who came up with the current phantom version: Phantom-n [v1.0]!
Of course, special thanks to everyone who read this story. Now I'm concentrating on Story 4 already!
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johnmyates
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Posted: 21 Oct, 2009
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Nice wrap up. Can't wait for the next book.
Marc
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