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Dagonian
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 Posted: 16 Jul, 2009
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Yay! I only just managed to catch up on reading this.
johnmyates wrote: If you keep working at your writing I think you'll develop into a pretty good story teller (that's a compliment, if there's any doubt ).
I definitely agree. Some things could be improved, but hey, no one's ever done learning, right? Just keep on going.
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 16 Jul, 2009
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Dagonian wrote: Yay! I only just managed to catch up on reading this. johnmyates wrote: If you keep working at your writing I think you'll develop into a pretty good story teller (that's a compliment, if there's any doubt ). I definitely agree. Some things could be improved, but hey, no one's ever done learning, right? Just keep on going. Sure, I'm not done yet, by far not.
Thanks for the compliments.
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 17 Jul, 2009
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I must add one thing: this whole part has become quite philosophical. I hope I have not pained you guys with it too much, because the worst has yet to come imo 
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johnmyates
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Posted: 17 Jul, 2009
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Bring it.
We're waiting,
Marc
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 18 Jul, 2009
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I've colored my island now (and I did a bit of photo shopping. It looks like this
I'm working on the next chapter, which will be done shortly. But I'll wait for a moment with uploading, until Tuesday or so.
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 19 Jul, 2009
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splattedone
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Posted: 19 Jul, 2009
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I loved that chapter. I can't wait to see the next one  .
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 20 Jul, 2009
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A small note: I thank dotswarlock for hist time to take a look at one of the scenes. You guys may find out which exactly
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johnmyates
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Posted: 20 Jul, 2009
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Very good chapter. Now we're going somewhere. Don't get me wrong, I think your battle descriptions are excellent. However, what's going on behind the curtain is what really gets me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens when these two meet up. Nice job.
Looking forward to more,
Marc
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 25 Jul, 2009
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Chapter 6, End of the line is uploaded. Enjoy
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Posted: 25 Jul, 2009
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Good one. Now to find out what's going to happen with Leython's guest.
Looking forward to the next one,
Marc
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splattedone
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Posted: 26 Jul, 2009
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johnmyates wrote:
Looking forward to the next one
Very much so.
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Posted: 29 Jul, 2009
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Chapter 7 (final chapter), The Last Trick is up! Enjoy
I'm moving on to the third story now and I hope that you'll like it.
To give you guys an idea of when it all happened, this story has taken place three years after chapter 1 of story 1, in the year of 3839, five years before Black Sun is being fired.
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Posted: 29 Jul, 2009
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Nice ending. I hope we see more of these characters in future stories.
Let's see where you take us next,
Marc
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Dagonian
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Posted: 31 Jul, 2009
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Posted: 31 Jul, 2009
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Nice ending. Looking forward to the next book.
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Posted: 31 Jul, 2009
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Dagonian wrote: Definitely an interesting ending!
Also, I've taken the liberty of updating your section in the Fanfiction index thread by saying that book 2 is complete.
Thanks! Also, could you change the "Type", short stories -> stories forming the life of Leython Dygonn?
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Dagonian
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Posted: 01 Aug, 2009
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Plasma_Wolf
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Posted: 01 Aug, 2009
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Ok, that's fine too
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