first chapter, first Cyb' part:
Dostya sheathed her practice blade, took two towels which hung form the wall and threw one of them to Valerie. The assassin caught it and nodded gratefully: “Your technique has improved.”
i think you meant "from" the wall
welcome back dots, i'm happy to discover some new chatper, im lucky i still have 16 ore to read for todaY!!
cheer continue keeping us happy, thanks for th good work!
---edit--- sorry i meant chapter 2, jsut after the encounter between Dost' and Val
n.b. assuming we are sunday... maybe i triggered some email notifications
just a bit later:
manure indecent you meant "mature" ? right ? (during Hall first contact with the Nation) Also i just noticed everythime you spell "i" you capitalize it: "I"