Nice one dots, poor Simmons going out like that, now thats dedication.

Also I was racking my brain where I'd heard that quote about mixing things and seeing what happens before, and I think I've just remembered. Did ya get it from Dr Who with him putting the two uber pen things together? (in the episode with the squidgy fat things. I don't usually watch it but I saw that episode since my GF had it on)

However I'm still thinking about the “I did not climb this high by being in those twenty-four percent. Just send me back there!” one from last chapter though, its driving me crazy so please tell if it is actually from something else.

Anyways as to the chapter, oof just the sorta ending we wanted. Things gettin frantic, battles happening allover the place, plot development.

Seems the UEF + Cybran alliance is fully sealed now, and the Aeon one is in the making, since they showed they were trustworthy by guarding the base, and even Desjar might put aside his differences a bit now. Hopefully they've learned their lessons from last time.

Seems a lotta pilots died but such is war, especially against the Sephys, heck Simmons uber nuke that wiped out half their base didn't even kill one. Nice introduction of the uber sephybot experimental too, can't wait for whatever future chapter ya describe a bigass battle with them using those against the other factions experimentals, *wink.

Great ending. Twas a pleasure reading it all as usual, cheers dude.

That would be a lot better without Clarke looking like a RealDoll under a sun lamp in the top right there.

That would be a lot better without Clarke looking like a RealDoll under a sun lamp in the top right there.

This. Redo plox.

That would be a lot better without Clarke looking like a RealDoll under a sun lamp in the top right there.

It seems weird, but I think I'll keep the original one. Samantha's face, fully lighted, reminds me of the sequence in which Seraphim nukes start falling. That was my impression of it at any rate

You wanted to achieve it looking stupid?

It seems weird, but I think I'll keep the original one. Samantha's face, fully lighted, reminds me of the sequence in which Seraphim nukes start falling. That was my impression of it at any rate

I know what it's supposed to be. That doesn't stop it from looking stupid. I wouldn't KNOW she was looking afraid if he hadn't told me, so it's not very good at getting its point across.

You're like Lucas or Buckley, so convinced you're right that you can't accept critique.

Am I? I doubt it.

I have PM'ed dotswarlock about this situation, about three days ago.
That there are four persons in total who said that they disliked the look of Clarke.
That the way I put her in there was, in my opinion the best way she looked.
I also have said that I would not like to take her away from the cover, that I have tried something else (the second, alternative cover), which I personally liked a lot less (and so did you guys).
I have said, that if he wanted the cover to look different, that he just had to make his comments on it, and that I would change it.
I can stand critisism, even though it is hard.
But if, apperantly, the person who is responsible for the book, is not satisfied with the cover and wants it to look different, then I'll change it. If the fans want it to look different, then HE is the person who makes the decision.

I can stand the critique, even though it is hard. But can YOU stand the fact that a decision has been made against your personal ideas on how something should look like?

Oh, ok, so both of you have bad taste instead of just you.

Makes sense.

I don't like it.

So we have a bad taste, while you know EVERYTHING about art, personal style, from everything all over the world?

No, doesn't make sence. I think I'll stop bothering replying to someone who doesn't make any positive comments at all.

No problem, I don't like every paining I see either.

Nope, I just know a lot more than you.

I don't need to make positive comments to make constructive comments. See how I went out of my way to show you, TWICE, how I was seeing it? And how you ignored them deliberately?

But EVERYONE who has commented on it except the person who requested it thinks it's stupid. Your failure to detect a pattern here is no fault of the audiences'.